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Old 09-21-2002, 12:45 AM   #2
Susan Ballinger Susan Ballinger is offline
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Very nice Mike! Could you post the reference picture here? I've seen it several times on another post, but there are a couple things bothering me here, so it would be nice to see the reference. The biggest thing is her floating elbow. Is there a reason you didn't add the sofa?

The other thing is her neck and shoulder area. It seems like she's straining her neck too far forward or that her shoulder should be raised up more in that position?

I'm not the expert here, so take my input with a grain of salt, but those are the areas that caught my eye. I think your beautiful daughter has been beautifully rendered. Are you planning on doing an oil painting of this as well?

Susan
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