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Old 12-12-2008, 08:19 AM   #1
Mischa Milosevic Mischa Milosevic is offline
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Debra, although this is a lovely subject and you have made some excellent choices there are some thing that could be considered. First the top back of the head it seems as she has none, next the rest lines are sharper then the fingers where it should be the other way around and the front of the neck is a touch to sharp and comes forward when that line should recede.

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