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Old 01-09-2008, 04:04 PM   #2
Allan Rahbek Allan Rahbek is offline
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Lesley,
I will give a few hints of what could be improvements.

The sides of the body are almost symmetrical, you would want more variation from one side to the other.

The figure seems to turn a bit to the right with the shoulders but the spinal column is not suggesting or seemingly following the twist.

The head and hair looks too big for the figure and out of proportion with the hip area.

Finally, the back lean of the chair seems odd, I would remove it and rather add some solidity to the seat instead.

Hope that you can use some of it.
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