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Old 11-11-2007, 06:19 AM   #1
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Ditto what's been said. I think your idea of the urn is good , but it looks to stacked in a row to me. My eye wants it to balance the composition with it by putting it a little further back and left.

I really like the vessel concept, and you painted her beautifully.

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Old 11-17-2007, 11:05 PM   #2
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Lisa, it is lovely! You did such a wonderful job with everything that you really need to pay closer attention to her fingers. The anatomy of her left finger is off and that to me weakens the wonderful underlying drawing skill you have shown elsewhere. Can't wait to see the final result being posted!
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