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Old 10-27-2007, 08:26 PM   #2
Allan Rahbek Allan Rahbek is offline
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Hi Jean,
It's great to see you around.
I like the energy of your nude painting in autumn colors.
I have a couple of suggestions if you are interested.
The pose looks a bit uncomfortable with the leg's. I would expect that the right leg would rest more obviously on the left and maybe would be bend a little. That would make room for variations in the light and shadows.
Try to not mark the collar bone and the muscles of the neck that much and like vice the folds on the side, or I should say, try to wary the shapes more so that they don't look like rope.
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