thank you for considering my suggestions. In order to give indication and a better idea of what I suggest I have used your image. I hope you do not mind. What I have touched up on is just edges the arrow indicates a lost edge.
Mischa, Thank you again for your suggestions.
I worked some more on the edges. Here is the result. I think I am almost done. However, any further comments are welcome and appreciated.
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No, this is from a photograph. I just recently discovered a life drawing studio in my town and I now enjoy going there every week. So far I did charcoal drawings there but hope to get to painting as well.