Portrait Artist Forum    

Go Back   Portrait Artist Forum > Oil Critiques
FAQ Community Calendar Today's Posts Search


Reply
 
Topic Tools Search this Topic Display Modes
Old 03-01-2007, 09:02 PM   #1
Janel Maples Janel Maples is offline
Juried Member
 
Joined: Oct 2003
Location: Wisconsin
Posts: 328



Hello Enzie,

Here is the reference photo. Just so you know, I didn't post the reference with this because I wasn't shooting for an exact replica of the photo. You could go nuts with pointing out the errors. There are a lot so don't put too much time into it.

My goal in this painting was to try to paint quickly and let go a little. This painting is not a commission.
Attached Images
 
__________________
Janel Maples
  Reply With Quote
Old 03-02-2007, 12:08 AM   #2
Enzie Shahmiri Enzie Shahmiri is offline
Associate Member
SoCal-ASOPA Founder
FT Professional
 
Enzie Shahmiri's Avatar
 
Joined: Sep 2002
Location: Laguna Hills, CA
Posts: 1,395
Janel, it is fun to let go, but you have a nice painting going here and it is worth looking at it.

First notice what the muscles are doing and get a feel for the areas that are raised. Whatever is raised has to come forward, the rest receeds. Now to get that raised arm to look right squint at the photo reference and simplify the arm into geometrical patterns. Mentally determine the cool, warm, grayed down or high chroma values. Pick one shape and relate the other pieces in value to that one. The value shifts for the exception of the shadow should not be more than 2. For starters that should give you the shape of the arm. You can always adjust color from there.

If it makes you feel any better, I have to do the same thing on the back of "Anna" WIP section. Based on the reference photo, I am blindly groping around trying to figure out what the back is doing. So I have taken out the dust covered anatomy books and am re-familiarizing myself with the anatomy of the back. Once I know what's going on there, I will do the same thing I have recommended to you and along with a prayer, hope for the best!
__________________
Enzie Shahmiri
Professional Portrait Artist
Founder of Southern California Society of Portrait Artists
Portfolio
Facebook
World Market Portraits Blog
  Reply With Quote
Old 03-02-2007, 09:51 AM   #3
Janel Maples Janel Maples is offline
Juried Member
 
Joined: Oct 2003
Location: Wisconsin
Posts: 328
Enzie,

I hope I did not come across in a negative way. You are 100 % right about the arm. I just knew if I posted the reference you could point out the arm, the head, the hair, the belly, the skirt, the veil..... I didn't want you to spend too much time on it.

But, thank you for pointing out the arm, It bothers me now too. : )

On a side note, nothing painting relaated, I think of you often when I get a whiff of the scented candles you gave me after the Vegas workshop.
__________________
Janel Maples
  Reply With Quote
Old 03-02-2007, 11:39 AM   #4
Enzie Shahmiri Enzie Shahmiri is offline
Associate Member
SoCal-ASOPA Founder
FT Professional
 
Enzie Shahmiri's Avatar
 
Joined: Sep 2002
Location: Laguna Hills, CA
Posts: 1,395
You are welcome!

I am happy to hear that you are still enjoying the candles. Most workshop attendees never think about how much work is done by the organizor behind the scene to make a workshop a success. You did a lot in Vegas and this was just a small show of gratitude.
__________________
Enzie Shahmiri
Professional Portrait Artist
Founder of Southern California Society of Portrait Artists
Portfolio
Facebook
World Market Portraits Blog
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing this Topic: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Topics
Thread Topic Starter Forum Replies Last Post
The Dancer Monique McFarland Portrait Unveilings, All Medium- Moderators: A. Tyng & C. Saper 5 04-29-2006 10:52 PM
The dancer Monique McFarland Resource Photo Critiques 28 04-25-2006 05:03 PM
Dancer Robert Wardle Figurative Unveilings, All Medium 0 06-17-2005 09:18 AM
Steel drum dancer Jean Kelly Pastel Critiques 5 08-19-2003 12:11 AM

 

Make a Donation



Support the Forum by making a donation or ordering on Amazon through our search or book links..







All times are GMT -4. The time now is 05:30 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.6
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.