Compositional critique requested

[Janel Maples]

Here is the photo of the creation I mentioned above (see the cool tail?)

This would turn out to be a 30" x 40" painting with a 5.5" head from chin to hairline.

[Mike McCarty]

Janel,

You're doing a very good job on this project. I would focus on the second image (just because it could be a smaller canvas) with a couple of notes:

Don't let yourself get too close to the top of the canvas and don't let the scarf, as it does in places, become too light in relation to the girls face. I don't particularly care for the pattern the scarf makes with the canvas edge at the top left of the third image.

Also, I wouldn't allow the geometry above to drive your thinking to the point of distraction from what could otherwise be a nice composition. Sometimes those things fall right into place, and sometimes not.

[Claudemir Bonfim]

I agree with Mike's suggestions.

That's a great composition, don't worry, it'll turn out to be a great painting. Don't worry about her right arm either, but don't forget about the space between her left hand and the frame point.

Happy painting.

[Claudemir Bonfim]

Ps.
You're really lucky to find such a pretty model. I've been looking for right one for a long time. I'm composing a sunflowers field and I need a lady, now I decided to use a 5 year old girl, I hope that'll turn out to be a good one like yours.

I'm really looking forward to seeing your finshed painting in the unveilings section.

C. ya.

[Janel Maples]

Thanks Guys!!

I'm glad you like the photo. It is nice to get a confirmation that others like the image as well and that I am on the right track.