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Old 04-08-2006, 08:48 AM   #1
Alexandra Tyng Alexandra Tyng is offline
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Hi LInda,

The composition is, I think, the most outstanding thing about this painting. It seems utterly natural, so I'm guessing it's the combination of your good directions, the family's natural inclunations, and maybe some fortuitous circumstances that made this come together. I don't mean to imply that it's not thought out. You obviously thought about this a lot, and it shows.

I notice the shoreline, and how it comes in at the left foreground and curves around toward the right middle distance. My eye travels naturally from the daughter to the son to the parents and dog, where it stops at the vertical bunch of tree trunks. So the shoreline ties everything together, kind of like the string in a necklace with a few choice stones on it.

Other than that, the body language of the family members is really expressive. I love how the dog is the only one looking straight at the viewer, and you expressed so well her position in the family!

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Old 04-08-2006, 09:40 AM   #2
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thanks guys - I'm glad you're liking it! I will have to repost the images - I don't know why the overall darks are so grayed with dark red patches. The actual painting is not as "chalky" and uneven in it's darks.
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Old 04-10-2006, 09:01 AM   #3
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Linda--

Even though the execution is in the inimitable Linda Nelson loose style, the overall effect is very integrated and whole. The light is fabulous.

A great painting!--TE
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Old 04-10-2006, 11:01 AM   #4
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Beautiful, Linda.
I am sitting at my desk at work, crying! Very moving painting! Excellent execution. I wish I could see this one in person.
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Old 04-11-2006, 08:31 AM   #5
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Thanks Tom, that means a lot


Thanks Patricia, wow to have painted something that moves someone to tears is a home run.
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Old 04-11-2006, 09:30 AM   #6
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Linda, this is just beautiful -- so well put together. The light through the trees and on the water --lovely. You've captured a real sense of place and a timelessness to it too. Beautiful!
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Old 04-11-2006, 10:05 AM   #7
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What a great composition and sense of light!

Question for you: have you done much plein air painting? Your outdoor portraits are particularly strong, I think.
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