Abbey

[Lisa Ober]

Hi Carloyn,

I love what you have so far. I am learning from the feedback you are receiving so I am so glad you posted. Personally, I love the way you have rendered the lighting on her face and her whole upper body looks natural to me. I like it very much.

[Carolyn Bannister]

Here's the updated version, have made some alterations but decided to not to make the actual window wider because it looked like a prison cell to me

The photo is quite good colour wise but still makes the painting look quite harsh/contrasty the original is much softer.

I think i've managed to keep the mood of the painting???

Carolyn.

ps i apologise, this photo leans the other way now