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Old 06-01-2002, 09:04 AM   #10
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Alicia,

The head, shoulder/dress and arm/hand seem to present great opportunities. Whatever composition you end up with I would recommend changing the boxy end of the dress on the lower right. Most of all, however, be careful with the leg. On my screen you cannot see any reference in the dress to suggest a knee and the leg tends to look as though in grew from her stomach.

I could see some possibilities with the chair but I wouldn't have the courage to attempt such a large shape along with it's competing white shades.

And make absolutely sure they really like and will live with the pout. It could be one of those decisions that later contribute to the "something is not quite right" question.

Good Luck
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