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Old 02-21-2005, 08:18 PM   #1
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David,

BEAUTIFUL! This is definitely pro all the way to me. You have such a stunning and compelling portrait of a beautiful child that I am still trying to catch my breath after you took it away! I love everything about this. She seems to speak volumes for the revolution in her midst. Her glow against the background fading to inky blackness is powerful, yet perfectly harmonious to me. These colors work well together. I don't know how you acheive such a natural feeling precision and finish. Wow!

Because of you (and Jimmie), I am afraid there will be another greater renaissance of pastels, this year. The rest of us had better learn how to use them too, lest we be blown away in the wake of your dust!

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Old 02-21-2005, 08:49 PM   #2
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Gorgeous David!
I just love how you handled the light and shadow, and reflected light on her delicate little face.
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Old 02-21-2005, 09:13 PM   #3
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??Really??!

Thanks, guys. I'm kind of blown away by your comments - delighted, but ...I guess I'm not seeing what your seeing. Maybe I'm still in "microscopic" mode, analyzing every little flaw and assuming everyone will see them like a billboard. Or maybe I just need more confidence....

Jimmie, thanks a bunch. It's 18 X 24" on Twinrocker "Tatiana" paper (pretty thin stuff and I gave it a beating) Various pastels - Rembrandt, Great American along w/ Pitt and Cretaclor pastel pencils. Expensive hobby.

Marvin, your words are a breath of fresh air. After reading all the threads concerning pastels - binders, substrates, fugitive, non-fugitive, fixatives.....my head was spinning. I know it's important, but... it was like: "I just wanna make a drawing." Thank you very much!

Garth, I think you're being overly generous...but, it sure sounds good!! Thank you so much. Your reponse makes me want to do another one - so I can see what Garth will have to say about it!! I've been under the weather lately and somewhat depressed. Your kind response has really cheered me up.
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Old 02-21-2005, 09:23 PM   #4
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Geez, David,

Your portrait is just beautiful! Geez! (I said that already) I think that anyother choice of background would have diminished the very powerful impact of this painting.

"Holes?" What surface did you use? Try the Wallis paper, you would need a drill to actually put holes is the stuff...
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Old 02-21-2005, 09:29 PM   #5
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Thanks Terri! (I didn't mean to make it sound like you're one of the "guys"

You should know that I've taken a good deal of inspiration from your paintings of children. Your modelling is sensitive and solid, composition is always well-balanced, but it's the expression of the children - that you somehow capture - that is always so compelling and always just right. That's the "look" that I'm after.
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Old 02-21-2005, 09:46 PM   #6
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My My!

OHmigod, David - this is gorgeous!
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Old 02-21-2005, 10:19 PM   #7
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Good gravy - your first stab, you say? Well, to expand on that idiom, you not only stabbed it good, you slew the Dragon and took the hoarded treasure!

This is gorgeous, no mistake. The textures, the atmosphere, the expressiveness, the lovely warmth of it all... I could go on, but I prefer to look at the picture!
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Old 02-21-2005, 10:28 PM   #8
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Perfect!
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Old 02-22-2005, 01:49 PM   #9
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This is STUNNING! Congratulations!
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Old 02-22-2005, 10:25 AM   #10
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My audible response was heard across the hall here at my office! She is beautiful. The portrait is stunning!
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