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Old 06-11-2004, 11:39 AM   #1
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Mike,
I like #2. With the hair pulled back over her near shoulder, there is clearer connection of the head with the body. I don't know if it's an optical illusion or not, but the head in the other photo looks a bit thrust forward. In all the photos, I also wish her expression were a bit happier.
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Old 06-11-2004, 12:27 PM   #2
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Mike,

Not to discount Marvin's observations, but of the two here, number one has a posture issue as Chuck points out. The hair is also a plus in #2, and #2 suggests a longer (more flattering for women), more elegant gesture.

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