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Old 05-20-2004, 07:14 PM   #1
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Hey Chase,

I know it's frustrating to post something and get no or little feedback -- It's happened to me before and it's incredible how deafening the silence is. May I suggest hunting out a few names of people you would like an opinion from, and literally sending them an private email asking them to give their feedback on the thread.

Anyway, my comment would be that what you did here is excellent, and frankly I wouldn't change anything. It's certainly out of the "traditional" genre, but it's emotional and visually well balanced I like how you reserved the use of color to the person, and I like how you defined the abstract shape as a door just with the knob detail.

Just a thought -- I think you should frame this, and may I suggest an ample mat around it, in a mid value that doesn't group with either the black or the white, and make the color of it an in-your-face red, which will play up the emotion of the piece, and visually tie with the red pen accent.

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Old 05-20-2004, 07:44 PM   #2
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I like it also Chase. I didn't have anything else to add - I find it interesting.

Don't be offended - you'll find there are less replies in the 'other medium' sections. Nothing is meant personally.
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Old 05-20-2004, 10:11 PM   #3
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I think the reason there haven't been many comments on this very bold and dramatic piece is that is so different from the traditional portraiture that is usually posted here and the kind of work that most of us do.

Many artists, myself included, might feel unqualified to comment on a piece that is such a radical departure from what we usually look at.
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Old 05-20-2004, 10:51 PM   #4
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thumbs up Interesting..

Hi Mitchell,
I am very much impressed with the style..it's difficult to bring out light-shadow effect with pen work...somehow, light/shadow theme seems very attractive to me. So as soon as I clicked on this link I could not resist scrolling down the screen and getting complete view of the picture. It's very impressive with details which explains the person is in deep thought!
Good work.
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Old 05-21-2004, 12:12 AM   #5
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Thank you thank you thank you.

I can not stress enough how much it meant to me that you all took the time to comment. And it boggled me to know that you liked it. I have been experimenting with these little sketches and have taken up a series of them. So far I have 4 completed and literally working on the 5th one right now.

If you are interested in seeing more I will be glad to post them.
Once again, thanks everyone for your kind comments.
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Old 05-21-2004, 12:17 AM   #6
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Sure, would like to see them. Keep up the efforts.
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Old 05-21-2004, 03:48 AM   #7
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This is just another of the series. Finished it today but added blue instead of the red.
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