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Uh . . . Short time-out, or "Take Five"
I'm familiar with most of the contributors and am able to "read" their styles and I once again thank every respondent who took the time to have a look at the piece and comment. I'm a sponge for information and I have soaked up every available drop from this critique thread, which I have now collected in a vial and am using as my medium for the revision. I obviously cannot implement every suggestion, but no contribution was without value, if only because it made me articulate for myself why I might not carry it into the piece. But again, I appreciate what everyone brought to the table.
Cheers,
Steven
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