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Old 12-05-2003, 12:35 AM   #7
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Terri,

I like this a lot. A couple of observations: On her right cheek, I would soften slightly the transition between light and shadow pretty much all around the perimeter. I would also knock off the sharp point at the bottom. Also take a look at her bottom lip on our right, as it makes the turn on the underside, I think you will see that it is slightly fuller than need be.

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