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Old 01-29-2003, 01:26 AM   #1
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It's a nicely executed pastel that may or may not work on a greeting card. (I used to freelance text for lines of alternative greeting cards, and it's not easy trying to guess what will have broad, much less targeted, appeal by the time it hits the market.)

All things considered, were you not constrained here by the reference photo, I think some changes in composition would be effective, but really, you've done some excellent drawing in difficult perspective and handled the pastels very well.

Have I weaseled out of that one yet?
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