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Old 01-05-2003, 07:52 PM   #3
Jean Kelly Jean Kelly is offline
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Mike, I've been thinking about this photo for a couple of days now. I really like the concept and this man's intimidating appearance. I believe that there is too much space to the right of his body. It detracts from the "arrogant" atmosphere. Also, the pool cue pointed directly under his chin is disturbing. Feels like he'll be poked there any minute. Also, his head looks like its a little too small for his body. Maybe its my old eyes deceiving me but could the angle have created a slight distortion?

I'm normally not this picky, but I find your subject so fascinating that I'm trying hard to see anything that could be improved. This could be awesome.

Jean
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