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Old 11-27-2002, 09:11 PM   #1
Gina Rath Gina Rath is offline
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Beth,

This little girl is sweet, but the transparent dress would seem difficult to tackle. You're braver than I.

I am just going to mention a couple of things that jump out at me (noting that I am not a pro). The purple background seems a little bright (intense) to me, taking away the importance of the figure. Also, the highlight on the left side of her face is a little too bright (or maybe too white) in color, which seems to flatten out her face. I like the skin color you have on her shoulder. Maybe you could bring some of that color into her face.

Now this is just my inexperienced opinion, you may want to wait for a professional critique before making any changes.

Good luck and keep on painting!

Gina
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