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Old 03-03-2004, 04:22 PM   #21
Sharon Knettell Sharon Knettell is offline
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Soft and lovely, Michele. You have captured a beautiful moment. Don't tell me that there aren't some teeth gritting moments working with kids which you have managed not to show !

Even 15 minutes from life is important to get that color reference, you can observe what the camera has left out.

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Old 04-08-2004, 12:16 PM   #22
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Just
I heard
God said
Let there be light
Then, there is life
More light is more life
Rachel
Your mother is your light
You are her life!
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Old 04-08-2004, 12:35 PM   #23
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I'm surprised I missed this one. Absolutely beautiful, and I agree with Jeff about the light source. I also see it being more important that she is the focal point. I believe you have easily surpassed the piece that inspired you.
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Old 04-08-2004, 12:40 PM   #24
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I've made some changes (moved candle reflection, changed relative brightness of sides of face so left side doesn't come too far forward as it used to, etc.)
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