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12-29-2001, 04:44 PM
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FT Pro, Mem SOG,'08 Cert Excellence PSA, '02 Schroeder Portrait Award Copley Soc, '99 1st Place PSA, '98 Sp Recognition Washington Soc Portrait Artists, '97 1st Prize ASOPA, '97 Best Prtfolio ASOPA
Joined: Jun 2001
Location: Peterborough, NH
Posts: 1,114
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Nice light. I like it.
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12-29-2001, 07:21 PM
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SOG Member
FT Professional
Joined: Sep 2001
Location: Cleveland Heights, OH
Posts: 184
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Hi David,
I have a suggestion concerning his left arm. It bothers me not knowing if its lying across his lap, or at his side. Perhaps just a hint of a value change indicating the position. Otherwise, I love the mood.
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12-29-2001, 11:12 PM
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Associate Member
Joined: Nov 2001
Location: Montreal, Canada
Posts: 123
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Hi, Stanka.
I see your point. I'll trot out the old stand-by; the original is less conflicted.
You're right though, the shirt & sleeve (his arm is on his lap) are too close in value. The puzzle is less when seen in RL (real life) as his wrist and part of his left hand is visible in the shadow cast by the arm of his chair. The shirt sleeve would have to be somewhat darker then the shirt-front, and I'm not convinced how that would work. I suppose I could also shadow the shirt above the sleeve too ...
Regards,
Dave
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