Jenni,
This is really lovely and I think it is greatly improved. Perhaps it's the Ampersand board of which I am a HUGE fan. I think your skin tones are so nice and I love the hair. The only thing I wonder about is the way the bottom looks. Were you planning on putting pastel there? I don't belong giving critiques as I am really new here but it seems that by either running to the end of the board or softening the bottom with pastel would finish it off nicely. Perhaps you will be doing that when you finish up the arms. I may be a tad ahead of you. In any case, you really did a wonderful work here.
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