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Old 01-22-2005, 02:08 AM   #2
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Hi Carolyn,

Really great capture of a likeness. I like the chromatic reflections going on over 99% of it. The only place that pops out at me as a bit askew are two teensy areas.

On her lower right jowl area there's the yellowish white spot that creates an slightly unseemly bulge. The other spot is the smear on the bottom of the line of the jaw. Both of these things makes that jowl area sort of distorted.

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