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Old 06-25-2002, 07:42 PM   #1
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I am very excited about this painting. I first met Sara and her fiancee Christmas of last year. She was in traditional dress and he in US Marine uniform. I asked if they would model for me one day. Last month she called to ask if we could begin. Here is phase one 24" x 36." You guidance is much appreciated.
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Old 06-25-2002, 07:44 PM   #2
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Here is the photo source...
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Old 06-25-2002, 08:15 PM   #3
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This will be lovely!

I am wondering about her right hand which hangs down at her side. It doesn't show in the reference. Are you planning to show it or something? It looks like it. Is it too short? If you are uncertain, perhaps it is best left behind. If that is the beginnings of the hand, I would suggest that it be perhaps a whole hand length farther down.
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Old 06-25-2002, 08:56 PM   #4
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What great subjects. It's easy to see why you are excited about this.
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Old 06-25-2002, 10:11 PM   #5
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Sleeve and Hand

The wonderful models had left after I realized the need to break up the linear symmetry of dress. I chose another photo and flipped it to incorporate lovely sleeve and hand. I will try several methods to check size and position tomorrow. I do not like combining photo sources, but this is an important element to the design. I hope I can make it work.
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Old 06-25-2002, 10:30 PM   #6
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I love the subject matter! This will be a nice portrait.

Check the amount of space between her left (our right) thumb and his body. It looks a little wider in the underpaint. I like the way the skirt flows from the wind in the second resource. Beautiful colors to work with!

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Old 06-25-2002, 11:14 PM   #7
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Dear Jeanine,

You can successfully combine these photos. Your viewing position has not changed; the thing to keep in mind is that the angle of the light has changed between photos. Fortunately the lighting is somewhat diffused; however, you will need to think about how you want to commit to the light direction, mainly on the skirt. I think you can accomplish this by emphasizing different color temperatures, and thereby avoid two equal and conflicting light sources.

I know these Korean wedding gowns, and they are gorgeous. It is also their nature to be very stiff, so I like that you have a windblown skirt, rather than having to try to invent one. What wonderful subjects!
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Old 06-26-2002, 04:10 PM   #8
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Yes, that hand looks right with that new reference. She is petite indeed!
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Old 06-26-2002, 09:13 PM   #9
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Jeanine,

What a handsome couple, she is very delicate and petite and he is tall and handsome. One little thing, in your underpainting check the corners of her mouth. They seem to turn down a bit more than in the photo. I have a habit of doing this and have to constantly check for the proper angle of the lips. I use a mirror and look at it over my shoulder and can usually pick it up.

It will be a fun one to paint.

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Old 06-27-2002, 04:00 PM   #10
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Take caution

The lighting on the "new" hand and arm is opposite from the light source on the figures.
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