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Old 10-22-2002, 08:05 AM   #18
Sharon Knettell Sharon Knettell is offline
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Lovely job!

Beth, it is really very lovely. You are making great steps. She really is adorable.

Here's the howevers. Tiny ones. The left side of her hair, towards the top could be rounded out a bit.

Squint at the reference and check your values. The light on the left side of the chin is as bright as the right. Also check the values on her forehead in relation to the light on her cheek, nose and extreme right forehead.

All and all a very good job! You should be proud! Go do another one!

Sincerely,
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