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Beautiful setting, beautiful pose and beautiful children!
I have a couple of suggestions. I would crop it just as you've shown it here. It's less of a portrait and more of a painting, though. Depends on what you're aiming for, I suppose.
I would agree with the suggestion to move the horizon line so it's not in line with the head.
I would not add a sailboat unless you have a photo of one taken in these exact same lighting conditions from this exact angle. I have learned (by making many of my own mistakes) that adding something which is not there is just about the most difficult part of painting!
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