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Old 12-13-2012, 11:03 AM   #1
Brunella Neri Brunella Neri is offline
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Brunella,

I agree with Ant that this is a very good start. In my humble opinion I think the hand does not read well. I believe you are going to end up with a very nice portrait that is distracted by the posing of the hand.

Just for the sake of exercise I have made a modification to the composition. Something for your consideration as you go forward. The bottom portion could be in vignette with some sweeping brush strokes.

Best of luck
Thank you so much, Mike. I will hold in high regard your opinion. In fact, it seems to work better.

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