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Old 02-25-2010, 07:50 PM   #4
Eileen Claire Eileen Claire is offline
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Hi Dianna,

She is a lovely child, and you have done a great job painting her. I would suggest lightening the value of the background, and putting more color into it. The dark background deadens this otherwise lovely portrait. I would also throw more variety in the skin colors to bring more vitality to the painting.
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