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Old 12-11-2008, 05:06 PM   #3
Claudemir Bonfim Claudemir Bonfim is offline
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You've got a few problems here.
Yes, I think there are too many knees, not because of the position, but because of photograph distortion. They are too big.
Another problem regarding distortion is the size of the heads, The head of the girl with a scarf is too big in comparison to the other two ones and her hand is way too small.
You'll have to correct the values too. The boy is in complete darkness.
There are no catchlights that will make the faces pop out of the canvas.
You have a flat image, that's a very nice photo, but I'm not sure how it will look on canvas.
Remember to not crop joints like elbows, writs, etc.

I'd like to see Garth's and Mike's comments here, they are our photograph wizards.

But if you chose to keep up with the job, I'm sure you'll impress us all.
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