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Old 04-03-2008, 09:48 PM   #8
Alexandra Tyng Alexandra Tyng is offline
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Sandra,

I do see an improvement in the light. The only thing that jumps out at me now is the dent in his nose. It didn't seem to be there before, and I would tend to go back to the way you had it originally because now it looks like something is amiss with his nose. As for the shirt, it looks more three-dimensional with the shadow at the front. If his mother loves it, I would leave it as is (except for the nose) and call it finished.
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