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Old 12-20-2005, 01:33 PM   #2
Jimmie Arroyo Jimmie Arroyo is offline
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Kimber, very nice and fresh. I personally don't mind seeing the lines used for the undershirt, to err is human, it can add to a drawing rather than distract. If I were to offer a critique (and it may only be valid depending on the amount of time you spent) I would have liked to see more mid-tones. Somewhere in between the shadow of the face and the color of the paper, especially considering how dark then light the background is. Just my 2 cents.
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