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04-02-2005, 06:57 PM
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SOG Member FT Professional '09 Honors, Finalist, PSOA '07 Cert of Excel PSOA '06 Cert of Excel PSOA '06 Semifinalist, Smithsonian OBPC '05 Finalist, PSOA
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Hi Chris,
I welcome you too! I love the punchy colors that are not dependent on the muted ones in the photo. I also love your easy casual style.
Forgive me but I am giving you one of my typical heavy-handed Photoshop analyses. The weakest part of your portrait is in the likeness and facial proportions. I scaled the photo to match the painting, and let the images speak for themselves. If you have not scaled your photo to the same size as your painting yet, I highly recommend that you do. This will help immensely to keep proportions in check.
To match the scale, I took the measurement from the top of the hair to the bottom of the chin. The eyes, nose, and mouth are set too high, although the ear is just right.
I think the eyes are too dark and harsh a blue, although in general I like your interpretation of color.
Thanks for sharing this. I hope I am not being too hard on you.
Garth
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04-03-2005, 03:30 PM
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Right. I hope you don`t mind but I`ve done a Photoshop paintover to try and make certain of what you are all saying and see if they work, including darkening under the chin and the eyes and a bit more work on the hair. On the anatomy issue, definitely right and something I might use in the future. But on this occasion I`m going to leave the painting as it is because it isn`t that important that I get it correct to the original picture, but a good idea for future portraits.
Please let me know if I`ve got it right. And the harder the critique the better, as far as I`m concerned. So much to learn.
Chris
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04-03-2005, 04:51 PM
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SOG Member FT Professional '09 Honors, Finalist, PSOA '07 Cert of Excel PSOA '06 Cert of Excel PSOA '06 Semifinalist, Smithsonian OBPC '05 Finalist, PSOA
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It does look even better than before, Chris. They will love it.
Garth
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04-10-2005, 03:57 AM
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Thanks Garth and everyone who took the time to comment. I`ve painted the photoshop adjustments now and post the final image.
Thanks again.
Chris
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