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Old 02-09-2005, 01:33 AM   #23
Jimmie Arroyo Jimmie Arroyo is offline
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Thanks guys,

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You'd never know you stressed about this one
Oh my God, trust me, there was much stressing going on. Still is, but the comments made here have made it easier.

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One teensy-tiny thing. I know her mascara is strong, but the inner tear duct is too harsh, soften it. Also When a models eyeliner is too dark I go a shade lighter in the pastel than what you think you need.
Thanks Sharon, your advice means a lot to me. I think I did better with the eyes. I lightened the mascara with dark gray and softened the duct. I also did minor changes to the nose, lips and shape of her left cheek. The closeup I'm including actually shows just how many layers were used until I came up with something I liked! I was nervous about loosing tooth.

I'm seriously considering changing the shirt neckline to show more upper chest, maybe a couple of inches. A Daniel Greene tape I have shows him using a razor to remove pigment. Has anyone tried this?

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also am anxious to see the level of your pastel work a year from now
I hope I get to work consistantly without interuptions, life is funny that way. Thank you.
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