Hi Lon,
thanks for posting the photograph. Don't change too much of the painting after what I say now, but I think that the two photographs you used to put together, the roses and the girl are two different worlds. The roses seem quite large in the collage and the lighting-situation is very bright when you compare them to the figure of the girl.
The colors of the girl in the photo seem also very blue-ish. But I don't know wehther that's also the case with the original print which you scanned in (or is this a digital image?). I corrected the colors a little bit.
Another remark which I would like to make. When you compare the photograph with the painting you seem to extend the forms in the vertical direction. Just something which can be useful to know.
Greetings,
Peter
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