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Old 01-31-2004, 08:30 PM   #1
Leslie Ficcaglia Leslie Ficcaglia is offline
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Terri, you're a trouper! Thanks for working your magic green lines with this again. Interestingly, I saw the extra "corner" on our left side of her jaw but I thought the right side needed to be fuller than I have it and than your green lines show. I went out to the studio this morning and reworked the whole mouth, bringing it up a little. I seem almost to have gotten it. It's hard because once I scrub it out I have no reference anymore to show me where it should begin and end using the green lines.

Not sure what you mean by "Her lips look a little thick near the 'corners' (mostly about even with the ends of where her upper teeth are visible - above and below, if that makes sense)" The rest is clear and I'll tackle her again tomorrow. I have never seen a mouth that's that hard to capture!

I think the shifting of the ear and widening of the nose between the eyes made a really big difference.

Thanks again!
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