Wow!
Let me get this straight....
Youv'e been studying from only books for just a year? I think this protrait is amazing. I think your portrait is so powerful that you could have just left it alone with out the black sweater. This piece reminds me of the picture I'm attaching. Notice the gestural lines that the artist has used for the remaining composition. Also, there's a white line under your daughter's right eye that really caught my attention. Maybe you could tone it down, especially in the right corner of the lid. If what you say is true about only learning from books I am seriously impressed. I look foward to seeing more of your work.
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