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Old 02-16-2002, 10:26 PM   #3
Debra Jones Debra Jones is offline
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I can feel her indigestion!

It has the wonderful blush and joyful fatigue of a mother in waiting. There is a nice mood.
I am waiting to hear what the pros say about the background.

Personally, I have a lot of trouble making them interesting hence my tendency to crop in tightly on the face and focus on features, rather than mood. My guts say it needs something more. I am not sure exactly what or how. Perhaps darkening the outter edges so it does not take your eye to the corner where there is nothing more to see?
I will keep an eye on this post.
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