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Old 03-31-2003, 09:12 PM   #1
Leslie Ficcaglia Leslie Ficcaglia is offline
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Thanks for posting the photo, dj*; you captured her beautifully. Actually you made her look even more expressive than the photo, if possible. But I think you made the shoulder on our left dip too far too fast after you delineated the seam of her robe at the neck, so it looks as though the shoulder then curves down too low. It works where the robe or kimono or whatever it is joins the neck, but then it's too extreme in comparison to the photo.
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