Portrait Artist Forum    

Go Back   Portrait Artist Forum > Oil Critiques


 
 
Topic Tools Search this Topic Display Modes
Prev Previous Post   Next Post Next
Old 02-19-2003, 02:30 PM   #12
Michele Rushworth Michele Rushworth is offline
CAFE & BUSINESS MODERATOR
SOG Member
FT Professional
 
Michele Rushworth's Avatar
 
Joined: Jul 2001
Location: Seattle, WA
Posts: 3,460
Very nice progress. The hair and chair are greatly improved.

I would take another look at the direction the eye on our right is pointing. If anything it looks as if it's turning in even more than before.

On the dress, I would suggest you try to find something appropriate that she can wear that you can paint while really looking at it. The vagueness I see in the treatment of the dress probably reflects the fact that you didn't have something right in front of you to see how the folds and reflections would go.

Also the shawl over the right shoulder is so close in color to the rest of what she's wearing that it looks like it's part of her dress, but not drawn quite right. I had to check your earlier postings to see that it was a separate piece of cloth.
__________________
Michele Rushworth
www.michelerushworth.com
[email protected]
  Reply With Quote
 


Currently Active Users Viewing this Topic: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Topic Tools Search this Topic
Search this Topic:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

 

Make a Donation



Support the Forum by making a donation or ordering on Amazon through our search or book links..







All times are GMT -4. The time now is 08:23 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.6
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.