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Old 12-01-2002, 03:21 AM   #6
Lon Haverly Lon Haverly is offline
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I like the candor of this drawing. You did quite well considering how long you have been away from charcoal.

I think the drawing would have been better without the white highlights. I never liked adding white to a charcoal. (I never mix drawing media anyway.) The white highlights are a little overdone in some areas, but overall, I think you have a pleasing style and a good eye for form.

I think the eyes perhaps are a little small. It is sometimes good to error on the side of the eyes being too big than too small.
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