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Old 05-19-2006, 05:24 PM   #1
John Bruso John Bruso is offline
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First self portrait 24" x 30"




This is my first post in four years. I apologize that my user name says John Bruso, my name is Mara.

I had originally intended to place this painting on the forum before it was "finished," but it took me a while to have the ability to log in again. Several years ago, I began painting what I called "Narrative Portraits" so that I could make a little money while growing my illustration portfolio. In the process, I discovered that my passion did not lie in illustration as much as portraits! Now, I can hardly bring myself to desire any other subject!

Upon my return to the forum after four long years, I discovered Bouguereau. So I purchased one of the books recommended by this site and decided I would like to tackle a portrait handling the skin tones similar to the way he did. Below is my very first self portrait (FYI, this was painted when I was in my first trimester of pregnancy. I am now in trimester #2). I apologize for the "red" tint to it. The real thing is a bit softer. The skin tones are a little more subtle than the image. I need to go back and re-shoot the painting for more accurate colors.

Even though I have this painting in a frame, I would not object to taking it out and making adjustments. I am especially interested in feedback regarding the composition. I used a lot of negative space and I used my signature in a way I have never done before. I welcome any critique anyone may have for this piece. Thank you very much for the opportunity.
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