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Old 06-10-2005, 07:26 PM   #4
Sharon Knettell Sharon Knettell is offline
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Dianne,

Your neck and head proportions are much better.

Was this a group session or your own model?

It would be better to have had more simplified lighting so you would have a stronger light and dark pattern on your head. The disparate sources of light create a busy pattern destroying the form, it should be much simpler.
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