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Old 07-29-2003, 10:30 AM   #3
Mike Dodson Mike Dodson is offline
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Jeanine,

I really like the composition and overall mood that this painting creates with th cool colors you have. Great hands too by the way.

The only thing I would work on would be the edges in a couple of areas, particularly along the train of her dress located at the bottom of the painting, it appears to be a bit sharp and distracting. I would also soften the edge of her hair behind her neck as you did on the upper portion of her head.

Nice work!
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