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Old 05-08-2003, 02:05 PM   #6
Mai Ly Mai Ly is offline
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Dear Gary,

This is a lovely painting. I do agree with Holly about the left hand, the way it was cut off as well as the brightness of the hand itself. Also, what bothers me with this painting is the way the (same left) hand reaches out creating a horizontal line, running almost parallel to the black bar from below, dividing the painting into two equal halves. However, this is only my opinion. You may want to hear what others may have to say, before making any changes to your lovely painting.

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Mai
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