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Old 01-14-2005, 09:59 AM   #10
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Vianna,

That looks much better. Since you are thinking about making a matched pair I would vote for changing your sons jacket, which in contrast to your daughter seems really casual. I think I would go with a collared shirt and sport coat. The suggestion about opposing views is also a good one.

It may be personal preference but I would like to see your daughters head go a little more toward the vertical.
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