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11-13-2005, 07:30 PM
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Joined: Apr 2005
Location: Waterloo, Ontario, Canada
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Lara, to my eyes you have done a superior job from inferior reference. When you figure out how to get a subject, who is paying for the work, to sit for hours while it is completed, let us know. We'd all be better off working from life. !!!
Janet
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11-13-2005, 07:38 PM
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CAFE & BUSINESS MODERATOR SOG Member FT Professional
Joined: Jul 2001
Location: Seattle, WA
Posts: 3,460
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Hi Lara,
I hope you're enjoying Maine. We're having a typically pouring down rainy fall day here in the Northwest. I'm sure you don't miss that!
This is such a nice drawing from very difficult reference. There are a few things that are off though. Chiefly, he looks a lot older in the drawing because the top of the head is too small. The forehead on the right and the whole hair area should both be quite a bit higher/larger.
I also think the outer corner of the mouth extends just a little bit too far on the left. I might also reduce the definition of the teeth, too. I do a lot of smiling portraits and I never feel the teeth look right unless I make the lines between them much, much fainter than the photo.
Don't worry about being able to paint from life. The piece you did in the weekend workshop on Bainbridge was gorgeous!
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11-13-2005, 08:04 PM
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#13
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Joined: Jan 2003
Location: Presque Isle, Maine
Posts: 48
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Good Point
Good point Janet. That comment lightened my mood a bit! You reminded my why I keep on working from photographs. No one has been willing to strap their child to a chair and force them smile at me for hours.
Nice to hear from you Michelle. I like all of your suggestions. Maine is fine--it is even colder and darker than Seattle. We are already in the 20's and this is Fall!
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11-13-2005, 10:32 PM
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Joined: Jan 2003
Location: Presque Isle, Maine
Posts: 48
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Changes
Here is where I am at with the changes:
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11-14-2005, 12:38 PM
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Joined: Apr 2004
Location: London,UK
Posts: 640
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Lara, I think you did really well on this one. I understand all your feelings very well, I paint mainly children and went through many frustrating moments. So... I lept half way! I started with painting my children live, and now I am already on the fourth work which is started on a photo, just for the basic mapping, and completed with live sittings, and I painted my children completely live.
Well, it's sooo different, but personally I find it more interesting, challenging and I really enjoy it !
Pros: painting more interesting, relationship with subject deeper, chance of pushing the colours a bit further.
Cons: a lot more difficult, takes longer, with children can only work during weekends, painting under constant pressure of speeding up.
As I said I always have a photo as a back up, but now I couldn't really go back to painting entirely from a photo with satisfaction.
Best of luck, and give it a go!
Ilaria
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12-09-2005, 05:48 PM
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Joined: Jan 2003
Location: Presque Isle, Maine
Posts: 48
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Finished...
Hello everyone,
I want to thank everyone for their help. I have come to the point where I am just going to let it be. Here is the final.
Thanks again!
Lara
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12-09-2005, 06:36 PM
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EDUCATIONAL MODERATOR Juried Member
Joined: Jul 2001
Location: North Carolina
Posts: 1,120
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Gorgeous!
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12-09-2005, 07:26 PM
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Joined: May 2005
Location: Kansas City, KS
Posts: 327
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Wow! Amazing!
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12-09-2005, 08:00 PM
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Juried Member
Joined: Apr 2004
Location: London,UK
Posts: 640
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Lara, this looks lovely and very lively!
Ilaria
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12-09-2005, 08:01 PM
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Joined: Dec 2004
Location: Scottsdale, AZ
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Stunningly well done. It was time to stop.
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