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11-03-2004, 04:33 PM
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Joined: Jun 2003
Location: Lake Elmo, MN
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Another head study
I just finished working on the 16 by 12 study of my daughter Claire. I need to let it sit so that I can come back to see it with a fresh eye. I'm trying to see my own work better. In the meantime, please take a look and help me out. Thanks
Amy
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Amy Otteson
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11-03-2004, 05:01 PM
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SOG Member
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Location: Great Neck, NY
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Beautiful!
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11-03-2004, 08:06 PM
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Joined: Sep 2003
Location: Gainesville, GA
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Wow!
Wow! I love this painting!
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11-03-2004, 08:11 PM
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Very nice!
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11-03-2004, 08:39 PM
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Joined: Sep 2001
Location: St. Paul, MN
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Hi Amy! How ya doin!
Excellent work - congratulations.
There are only two things I'd change
- the highlight for the tip of the nose is up just a bit too high.
- the lower eyelid on the left (her right) looks a bit straight. It seems the other eye is larger than in the photo, but I wouldn't change it - it looks great, and is beautifully painted.
Oh one last thing - the hair that is front of the ear is more of a flat shape than the pointed that you have - but this is minor and I didn't notice before I looked at the photo.
Terrific job Amy!
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11-04-2004, 08:25 AM
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Location: Safety Harbor, FL
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Hi Amy,
This is a beautiful study of your daughter. I like the distinct planes of color, and the range of color you gave her face, that doesn't exist in the photo.
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