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Old 01-12-2002, 02:39 PM   #1
Timothy C. Tyler Timothy C. Tyler is offline
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smile My first post, "Rome Beauties", 72 x 42 oil




This my first offering to this forum, I joined 20 minutes ago. How neat to find such a place.

This work was done on the heels of reading all the old books on JS Sargent I could find and trying to paint purely from life sight size the way he did, which is to say using the same methods.
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Old 01-12-2002, 02:41 PM   #2
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This work is owned by the Bennington Center for the Arts in Bennington, Vermont and is on display there normally.
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Old 01-12-2002, 06:05 PM   #3
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Hi Tim,

I give you lots of credit for working entirely from life, especially on such a grand scale. It indeed has the air of Sargent. Your palette has a nice warmth to it as well...great work!
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Old 01-12-2002, 07:42 PM   #4
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smile Now that was generous!

I'm going to post some old in progess photos of the model and the effort as it was coming together. I usually hear about the neck until I show the model's photo. Thanks very much.
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Old 01-12-2002, 07:53 PM   #5
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WOW! I can't wait to see the progress shots.....and welcome to the forum
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Old 01-12-2002, 08:52 PM   #6
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Wow! Wonderful painting! I love it. Welcome Tim!
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Old 01-14-2002, 12:04 PM   #7
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In progress shots

Apple basket (finished) sight size, I just map across and make the picture look like the subject...hopefully.
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Old 01-14-2002, 12:10 PM   #8
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B/W shot of the subject/model

B/W shot of the model.
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Old 01-15-2002, 12:54 AM   #9
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Input please

I should have posted this under critiques maybe, I'm new here and welcome input. I do not want nice remarks but would welcome input on the work. I'm not thin skinned. Don't be shy...
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Old 01-16-2002, 03:14 PM   #10
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Dear Tim

I love your work and enthusiasm for your technique. You are my kind of artist. Your values and color look good but try checking your drawing with some of the following.

-the humerous of the left arm looks long compared to her right arm.

-head size to body length check it. I know comic strip heroines tend to have longer bodies for head size which gives more of a heroic presentation, but is this what you were looking for?

-her right foot looks uncomfortable or unstable or unnatural which attracts too much attention.

Those are my main comments, I would have to get very, very picky to catch other recommeded items.
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