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Old 10-24-2006, 11:55 AM   #1
Marina Dieul Marina Dieul is offline
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Hi,
this is a 24" X 36" oil.
It's not finished yet, I want to work more on the sky, and a bit on the fabric, but the shapes and values are here.
I want to finish it this week, so if you have something to to tell me, it's time.
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Old 10-24-2006, 12:00 PM   #2
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The contrasts look too hard on my screen. The painting is more subtle in the dark parts.
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Old 10-24-2006, 07:14 PM   #3
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I think this one looks better.
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Old 10-24-2006, 08:44 PM   #4
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Right now I am in awe. This is no cute baby portrait, even though the baby is adorable. This is a figurative piece that says something much more, I'm not sure what, but does the viewer have to be sure WHAT a work of art says, exactly? I would venture to say you are getting ready to move figurative art in a new direction.
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Old 10-25-2006, 04:23 AM   #5
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The baby is really cute and normally I hate cute baby pictures but........

the most impelling component for me is the impending doom in the clouds, its beautiful and hard hitting.

Just my take on it though
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Old 10-25-2006, 07:57 AM   #6
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Marina, wow! I love this painting! Your choice of placement for the baby is terrific. (When I saw the title of the thread I expected a wing-sporting baby.)

Really nice treatment of light, the satin is beautiful, the clouds convincing.

Your flesh tones are very nice. There's one thing, though - I would take a look at the baby's chin area. Just below and to the side of his mouth, the color is very warm and saturated. I think if you grey that area down just a tad, you'll see more convincing flesh tones.
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Old 11-14-2006, 02:53 AM   #7
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You painted the baby in an outstanding way imo I suppose it is a hel of a job to make look a baby as a baby! The gray clouds are a bit depressing imo in contrast with the new life witch the baby is.
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