First Post - 2 Portraits

[Garth Parker]

Hi All,
This is my first post. I

[Garth Herrick]

Hey Garth,

Welcome to the Forum, and Happy New Year!

You are the first "Garth" I've encountered in a very, very long time. The last other Garth I actually communicated with was back around 32 years ago in junior high (yes, there actually were two Garth's in the same school, and during third grade, the same class)! Gosh, I hope things don't start getting confusing around here. Now I guess I will have to call myself Garth H. I don't know about your experience with the name, but for me, if someone called "Garth" from accross a crowded room (or Forum), I could be pretty sure they were addressing only me. But alas, no more! Such a common name we share, Garth!

These two portraits of yours are original, and rich in complex detail painted with sensitivity. It's facinating to me to see your approach to portraiture from photographic resources, because I am working from similar ones. At first glance, I did not realize these, and your other painting of your grandfather were not the photographs, but paintings, with their faithful rendering. I would be interested in knowing your thoughts about the challenges of using photographs as primary painting resources, but I suppose it would be better to discuss that at length within another section of the Forum.

It's nice to have you here sharing your paintings, and I will look forward to seeing more of your works represented.

Sincerely,

(the other) Garth

[Cindy Procious]

Originally Posted by Garth Herrick

(the other) Garth

You've just named yourself! (t.o.)Garth

[Cindy Procious]

Garth, these are very good. I'm glad to see you're not wedded to using flash photography.

You've posted in the unveilings section, which is not for critiques, but since you asked...

Maria is a dynamic composition, and lovely use of color. Very nice.

Isaac is adorable. The one thing that stands out to me, however, is the edge treatment seems to be pretty much the same throughout the painting. You could improve this one by varying the edges more, and in particular, softening a lot of the hard edges.

[Garth Herrick]

Originally Posted by Cindy Procious

Garth, these are very good. I'm glad to see you're not wedded to using flash photography.

You've posted in the unveilings section, which is not for critiques, but since you asked...

Maria is a dynamic composition, and lovely use of color. Very nice.

Isaac is adorable. The one thing that stands out to me, however, is the edge treatment seems to be pretty much the same throughout the painting. You could improve this one by varying the edges more, and in particular, softening a lot of the hard edges.

I was going to critique as well, but then I noticed this was the no-critique unveilings section. I think Cindy's above assessment is good.

Garth (Herrick)

[Garth Parker]

Thank you both for your observations and comments. I noticed this was in the non-critique area after the post (rookie mistake). I